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Tia's Promise by The0ne-u-lost Tia's Promise by The0ne-u-lost


First off I would like to thank anyone who reads this description, as it reviles a deeper meaning in this comic.

Okay, so If you have already read it you know about the Kid Friendly massage in this comic, about a true friendship.
Well stop right there because there is a much deeper meaning to this comic.

As you might have noticed, this is a really long time to be worried about a promise made such a long time ago; and it should have been resolved by now right? I mean Twilight is an Alicorn that's pretty for ahead in the story.


This comic is about closure, I know all to well the need for closure, and being too scared to try and get it.
This is my explanation of why Celestia did not say it up till now: Fear of the response.

-And happy ending she managed to get hers.

This comic, the idea of closure is how I became a brony...

Warning this is going to be very personal

For those of you reading this thank you even more, This will explain why I made the comic.
While Celestia managed to get her closure, I on the other hand did not.

My closure never came because three years ago, the one man I needed it own father died of kidney cancer.
They thought that they got rid of it when they took the kidney out.

He was doing fine for about a month until the symptoms came back, we went back to San Antonio to have him checked again.
He had an unknown aggressive cancer, It was already in stage 4. On the 4th of July 2010 my father passed away while I was watching him.

Seeing a parent you love die right in font of you is one of the most horrible things you can experience.

I realized very quickly that I had never got closure for one of my biggest regrets I had not told him about.
Soon all of the things I could have told him rushed into my mind, I quickly became suicidal.

This is where I became a brony...I used to lie all the time saying that I just became a brony this year; but that is not true.
One day I picked up the remote and turned on the TV, and there was the episode that changed me.

"Luna Eclipsed"

I laughed more then I have in months.

It took the pain away, I continued to watch it and soon I was hooked.

This comic is in a way my closure I never got, MLP saved me (much to my family's disapproval)

This comic is from the heart, Thank you My Little Pony

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Silverkitsune26 Featured By Owner 2 days ago
This is so deep. Wonderful work. ^_^
alex30614 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  New member
I' will cry
CarlGrimesFanpage Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  New member Student Digital Artist
Bettina2013 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
I'm gonna cry!
LullabyCresent Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Student Artisan Crafter
Technically, she sent Nightmare Moon away, not Princess Luna. XD
Two different ponies, just Luna's trapped inside.
Sprinkle-X-Heart Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  New member
Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] 
EeveeDash9 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2015   Traditional Artist
Sad chica Sad Fluttershy Cry forever Sad Pony :Sad Monkeys: STITCH LLORA Cry run Sad Cutecookies Mascot Sad STITCH TRISTE Pinkamena sad 
corperalking Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
OnePieceLover555 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015
Wow. Just wow. I honestly, truly sympathize for you. 
Monkeyrofl901 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Damn.  That's heavy.  Nice work, bro.
turkey18eye Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014
promisses are sometime usually meant to be broken
MarissaC702 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Waaaah! Them feels tackled me and won't let me back up
Ask-The-Other-CMC Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Student General Artist
That's a great lesson at the end. I'm tearing up.
MLPRocks190 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014
PonyMoog203A Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
This is great story...
ringtailmaster Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014
so deep, but amazing, nice job  n_n 
AerithEchidna4rt Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a beautiful comic, and it has such a beautiful meaning to it <3 :')
vic5236 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna Clapping Pony Icon - Fluttershy Clapping Pony Icon - Rainbow Dash Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Celestia Clapping Pony Icon - Rarity Clapping Pony Icon - Pinkie Pie Clapping Pony Icon - Vinyl Scratch Clapping Pony Icon - Nightmare Moon Clapping Pony Icon - Applejack Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight Sparkle Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Cadence Clapping Pony Icon - Queen Chrysalis Clapping Pony Icon - Changeling Clapping Pony Icon - Trixie Clapping Pony Icon - Applebloom Clapping Pony Icon - Spitfire Clapping Pony Icon - Lightning Dust Clapping Pony Icon - Soarin Clapping Pony Icon - Soarin - Wonderbolt Uniform Clapping Pony Icon - Babs Seed Clapping Pony Icon - Rainbow Blitz Clapping Pony Icon - Complete Mane Six Clap Clapping Pony Icon - Scootaloo Clapping Pony Icon - Instructor Uniform Clapping Pony Icon - Sweetie Belle Clapping Pony Icon - Lyra Heartstrings Clapping Pony Icon - Thunderlane Clapping Pony Icon - Minuette Clapping Pony Icon - Bubble Berry Clapping Pony Icon - Sweetie Drops/BonBon Clapping Pony Icon - Spitfire - Wonderbolt Uniform Clapping Pony Icon - Shining Armor Clapping Pony Icon - Braeburn Clapping Pony Icon - Season Four Twilight Clapping Pony Icon - Randy Clapping Pony Icon - Butterscotch Clapping Pony Icon - Dusk Shine Clapping Pony Icon - Complete Stallion Six Clap Derpy Clapping Pony Icon Vinyl Scratch The DJ PON-3 Clapping Pony Icon - Elusive Clapping Pony Icon - Meadow Song Pinkie Pie Scream01 Clapping Pony Icon - Flutterbat Clapping Pony Icon - Steve Princess Celestia Icon Profile Clapping Pony Icon - Sunset Shimmer Clapping Pony Icon - Octavia Clapping Pony Icon - Apple Jack :twilightsparkle: Clapping Pony Icon - Buttercheese Pinkie Pie EyeFlutter Clapping Pony Icon - Trixter Brohoof Clapping Pony Icon - Snowdrop Pinkie Pie Squint Clapping Pony Icon - Applejewel Clapping Pony Icon - Diamond Tiara Sad Pony Clapping Pony Icon - Dinky Hooves Clapping Pony Icon - Maud Clapping Pony Icon - Button Mash Clapping Pony Icon - Lovestruck Clapping Pony Icon - Nyx Clothed Tea Choco clapping icon Pencil Swirl clapping icon Rainbow Factory Cloudy Day clapping icon Clapping Pony Icon - Bat Pony Cleo Clapping furrydreamclapplz Derpy Clapping Icon Snapshot Clapping Pony Flufflepuff COM: Alicorn Pinkie Pie clapping icon Hush now Rainbow Dash Blink Icon Darkdash Clapping Jessica Pony Clapping Icon Goldboom clapping pony MLP Fizzy Pop Outlaw Pony Icon Suki Sama (me) Splash Paint Clapping Icon Thunder-Bolt Cheese Sandwich clapping Starry Skies Clapping Icon Trotting Icon - Buttercheese Shy Fluttershy Free avvie Sea Waves Clapping Icon Clapping Wolfie Paintbrush von Glitter Clap Apple Bloom clapping icon RQ: Nikki Nerdette clapping icon Gift: Pink Flame clapping icon Princess Amethyst clapping icon Lotus Flower clapping icon RQ: Cloud Mane clapping icon RQ: Ember Ashes clapping icon Gift: Strawberry Twist clapping icon Fluttershy Blink Icon request #6 clapping etosama Clapping Pony Icon - Maud (slow) Pony: Finland Claping Killer Dubstep Beats Jasmine clapping Icon Clapping Pony Icon - Swago Skittles [ Gift ] Heart Happy clapping pixel icon COM: Icy Dash clapping icon COM: Courageous Heart clapping icon Thunder Cobalt Clapping pony icon Clapping Pony Icon - Inky :Clapping Katja: V2 pinkcherry halloween pony Clapping Pony Icon: Buttons Clapping Pony Icon - Blinky Pony-Rozan-clapping-2 RQ: Super clapping icon BLU scout clapping pony icon Dinky Clapping History Lover :GIF: Clapping Dubby Blair Clapping Pony Icon My Use ONLY! Gabi request #5 clapping skunky Clapping Skunky (filly) COM: Rose clapping icon Queen chrysalis icon COM: Fire Splash clapping icon Aunty Clap Lavender Fritter clap Crystal Clap Gift: Blue Flare clapping icon Clapping Encore Clapping Pony Icon - Smockey Tech (COMMISSION) Clapping Matt COM: Whitestar clapping icon Request-free pony Applejack icon Blinking Rainbow Diamond Vilacia Clap clapping katja (filly) Twily Icon :3 Custom: Numskull COM: Jaeger clapping icon COM: Angel clapping icon Clara Heart Clapping Icon Happy Daze Another clapping pony icon Shooting Star Flower Sprouts Clappin' Poneh Clap pony icon Melly Clapping Verdure 1 Arturia Shieldhearth clapping pound cake laugh emoticon Clapping Pony Icon- Great Gamer Queen Chrysalis icon (2) Kushell Blink Icon GaniGhost clapping Clapping Notepad COM: Sugar Butter clapping icon Clapping Icon flor SlendaMan~gift COM: Red Lock clapping icon Points lick 
Lara12anos Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014  Student General Artist
OMG! Too many ponies! :faint:
Delexsy Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
All the ponies lol XD
vic5236 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
Luna 50X50 (icon smaller)Trotting Icon - Ponyta Shinx animated sprite Tyranitar la Pikachu pixel animation Lucario Emoticon - Aura Sphere Blinking Charmander Avatar Bulbasaur Evolution Heracross la Lugia.gif DevianART icon Gallade Attack Trotting Icon - Buttercheese Fennekin Emote Kotone Shiny Umbreon Avatar Glittering Gem Bullet (Tan) - F2U Tsutaja attempt Greninja Emote Buizel to kiss a Teddy Koromori 
PrincessLuna1001 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Artist
In my favorites...:iconohyoublushplz: 
The0ne-u-lost Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Superstargirl1 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm so very sorry about your father. I don't know what it's like to have a parent die infront of you and... I'm so sorry...
bluefoxycat Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry about your father. Cuddle?
bluefoxycat Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Also, my grandmother died of bowel cancer. CURSE YOU, CANCER! (And skin infections. :iconrageplz:)
Applejack2011 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014

This seems to be a S5 Luna centered episode.
JenAndAll Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
MLPRocks190 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
My chest litterally started hurting after reading this...LeeEverett 

Danisnotonfire: FEELS 
kysoshadowblast Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Student General Artist
oh.. this is so sad...
Arielmlp Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014
This is so beautiful and it reminded me of lullaby for a princess and Luna's reply
Sky-Zoned Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
This really tugged at my heartstrings~  Such a beautiful comic :)
E09378 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
That was just.. I ALMOST CRIED!!
CandyTheKat Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
They have such a powerful bond.
ThEdErPyBrOnY1 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i like this Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna 
foxfannumber1 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014
Wow this is amazing
mlpcool495 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
luvbug01 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry
ciskat Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OH--- THE FEELS!!! HHHNNNGGG Love :happybounce: I am a dummy! Clap Waaaah! I think I've fainted. 
mlpgirl1001 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Student Artist
bluebell5656 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Student General Artist
I am so sorry! 
BookLoverTwilight Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That story in the comic there is epic, but the one in the description is epic-er. The most amazing thing about it is that it's saying that MLP can help people out, for real, it's not just there to teach a lesson. It's there to help people and to demonstrate what our world could be if we all cared for each other.
PhantomNova189 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
No other comic could possibly deserve a favorite status more than this one,
This artist is the best brony of all time
No words can describe this
kayanne21 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...That's really sweet.
ZeldaPegasusofNerds Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful, and I feel sorry for you. *hugs* MLP:FiM is the savior of many~
werecass Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Artist
Poor Celelstia, but I'm happy that she all better now.
DragonTamer360 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*HUGS* he is in a better place now...

p.s. I feel so sad for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11 :"(
Babyjoshy5 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:wow: Wow. Good job.
ColonelBSacquet Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Friendship ? That's even more. We're talking right about sisterly bonds between Goddesses Princesses here. :-)
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